因為我們中國人的思考方式和老外不太一樣，所以在留學期間的作業完成上也會有些許代溝。最直觀的一點就是我們缺少教授看中的批判性思維。所以批判性的Essay我們往往得不到高分。今天海馬老師教大家幾個批判性Essay的慣用句式，有了這些句子的引導大家也會逐漸使用批判性思維來寫作啦~

（一）提出建設性意見

1.The study would have been more interesting if it had included...

2.These studies would have been more useful if they had focused on...

3.The study would have been more relevant if the researchers had asked...

4.The questionnaire would have been more useful if it had asked participants about...

5.The research would have been more relevant if a wider range of X had been explored.

（二）引出問題局限性：通常分為兩個方面：理論&觀點

★理論：

1.The main weakness with this theory is that...

2.The key problem with this explantation is that...

3.However，this theory does not fully explain why...

★觀點：

1.One criticism of much of the literature on X is that...

2.However，there is an inconsistency with this argument A serious weakness with this argument，however，is that...

3.One question that needs to be asked，however，is whether...

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Essay不同于小說的描寫，他是有固定的句式，所以使用重復也不會有太大的問題。只要大家明白批判性Essay的寫作模式，就可以跳脫這個框架進行獨立寫作啦。如果大家在寫文章的時候還有什么難題可以點擊下方鏈接進入海馬課堂尋求幫助哦~